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Checkout & Email Retention Teardowns

Most stores lose sales in two places: the emails sent after a signup or an abandoned cart, and the product pages that carry the sale. We audit both and hand back copy you can paste straight in.

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Who it’s for, and the problem

Who it’s for
  • Shopify and direct-to-consumer brands that already collect emails
  • Founders who know their emails and product pages could work harder but lack the time
The problem

Welcome emails read like templates, abandoned-cart reminders are easy to ignore, and product pages leave questions unanswered at the moment a shopper decides.

What you get

Welcome email audit

A review of your welcome emails: timing, offer, tone and what the first message asks the reader to do.

Abandoned-cart audit

A review of your cart reminders and how they bring the shopper back to checkout.

Product page review

Notes on headlines, descriptions, proof and calls to action on your key pages.

Paste-ready rewritten copy

New subject lines and email copy formatted so you can drop it into your email platform.

Prioritized fix list

The changes most likely to matter first, so you know where to start.

Monthly management

After setup, ongoing management of your flows if you want it.

How it works

1

Send your store

Email your store link and forward your welcome and cart emails.
2

Free sample

We send a short teardown of one email so you can judge the depth.
3

Full teardown

The full audit and rewritten copy arrive by email.
4

You implement or we manage

Paste the copy in yourself, or add monthly management.

Pricing

Pricing
$1,000–$3,000 setup

Plus monthly management.

Good to know
  • Setup covers the teardown and the rewritten copy.
  • Monthly management is optional and quoted separately.
  • The first sample is free.

Sample work

An example store teardown showing how findings and rewritten copy are presented.

Store teardown PDF

Questions

Which email platform do you work with?

The copy is written to be pasted into whichever platform you use. Tell us which one when you write.

Do you need access to my store?

To start, a store link and the emails you forward are enough. We will say what else we need as the work grows.

Is monthly management required?

No. Setup stands alone, and monthly management is an optional add-on.

What does the sample cover?

A short teardown of one of your emails, so you can judge the depth before you commit.

Send us your store

Send your store link and one email and we will return a free sample teardown.

Request a free sample businesswinnow@gmail.com